diff --git a/selected/http_to_phy.md b/selected/http_to_phy.md
index 32ea0af..339d7c4 100644
--- a/selected/http_to_phy.md
+++ b/selected/http_to_phy.md
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Our packets look like this:
 ```
 ETHERNET > IP > TCP > HTTP
 ```
-[NOTE(cloin): Figure out how to break out this analogy, this makes a useful textual transition]
+[NOTE(cloin): Figure out how to break out / reflow Hayden's analogy, this makes a useful textual transition]
 
 Relate it to what a USPS facility might be responsible for on a given day, perhaps?
 - HTTP is the request to Amazon to buy a product? "I want this product sent to my address"