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From: Ben Visness <ben@bvisness.me>
Date: Mon, 29 May 2023 09:54:12 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] N U A N C E

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     <h2>Fishbowls</h2>
 
-    <p>Every so often on the Discord, we host a <b>fishbowl</b>: a panel conversation where a select few community members can discuss a topic in detail. Fishbowls give us the opportunity to discuss difficult subjects with more nuance and detail than you can find anywhere else on the Internet. In many ways, they're a distillation of everything the network is about.</p>
+    <p>Every so often on the Discord, we host a <b>fishbowl</b>: a panel conversation where a select few community members can discuss a topic in detail. Fishbowls give us the opportunity to discuss complex topics in more depth and detail than a normal chat conversation would allow. They give our best conversations room to breathe.</p>
 
     <p>This is an archive of those conversations. If you would like to catch one live, <a href="https://discord.gg/hmn" target="_blank">join the Discord!</a></p>